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|  Tom Registered Member

Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 10353 | Posted 2/6/2003 3:24 AM (GMT -6) |   | Let's share some of our favorite poesms.
A couple of cool poems:
A Comparison
The lapse of time and rivers is the same; Both speed their journey with a restless stream; The silent pace with which they steal away No wealth can bribe, no pray’rs persuade to stay; Alike irrevocable both when past, And a wide ocean swallows both at last. Though each resemble each in ev’ry part, A difference strikes at length the musing heart; Streams never flow in vain; where streams abound, How laughs the land with various plenty crown’d! But time that should enrich the nobler mind, Neglected, leaves a dreary waste behind.
William Cowper (18th Century)
The Love of the World Reproved
Thus says the prophet of the Turk— Good Muslimun, abstain from pork; There is a part in ev’ry swine No friend of follower of mine May taste, whate’er his inclination, On pain of excommunication.
Such Muhammad’s mysterious charge, And thus he left the point at large. [Had he the sinful part express’d. They might with safety eat the rest; But for one piece they thought it hard From the whole hog to be debarr’d, And set their wit and work to find What joint the prophet had in mind.]
Much controversy straight arose— These chose the back, the belly those; By some ‘tis confidently said He meant not to forbid the head; While others at that doctrine rail, And piously prefer the tail. Thus, conscience freed from ev’ry clog, Muhammadans eat up the hog.
You laugh—‘tis well. The tale applied May make you laugh on the other side. Renounce the world—the preacher cries. We do—a multitude replies. While one as innocent regards A snug and friendly game at cards; And one, whatever you may say, Can see no evil in a play; Some love a concert, or a race; And others—shooting, and the chase. Revil’d and lov’d, renounc’d and follow’d, Thus bit by bit, the world is swallow’d; Each thinks his neighbor makes too free, Yet likes a slice as well as he; With sophistry their sauce they sweeten, Til quite from tail to snout ‘tis eaten.
William Cowper (18th Century)
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 |  GregBoyd Registered Member
 Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 1818 | Posted 2/6/2003 4:33 AM (GMT -6) |   | Design by Robert Frost
I found a dimpled spider, fat and white On a white, heal-all, holding up a moth Like a white piece of rigid satin cloth -- Assorted characters of death and blight Mixed ready to begin the morning right, Like the ingredients of a witches' broth -- A snow-drop spider, a flower like froth, And dead wings carried like a paper kite.
What had that flower to do with being white, The wayside blue and innocent heal-all? What brought the kindred spider to that height, What but design of darkness to appall? -- If design govern in a thing so small.
"In Christ...the ONLY THING that matters is faith energized by love." Galatians 5:6 | | Back to Top | | |
 |  following Registered Member
 Date Joined Feb 2003 Total Posts : 24 | Posted 2/6/2003 4:57 AM (GMT -6) |   | Looking at Stars
The God of curved space, the dry God, is not going to help us, but the son whose blood spattered the hem of his mother's robe.
Jane Kenyon
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 |  fyodor Registered Member
 Date Joined Dec 2002 Total Posts : 179 | Posted 2/6/2003 5:07 AM (GMT -6) |   | Robert Frost, "Mending Wall" ------------------------------------------------------------------------
Something there is that doesn't love a wall, That sends the frozen-ground-swell under it, And spills the upper boulders in the sun, And makes gaps even two can pass abreast. The work of hunters is another thing: I have come after them and made repair Where they have left not one stone on a stone, But they would have the rabbit out of hiding, To please the yelping dogs. The gaps I mean, No one has seen them made or heard them made, But at spring mending-time we find them there. I let my neighbor know beyond the hill; And on a day we meet to walk the line And set the wall between us once again. We keep the wall between us as we go. To each the boulders that have fallen to each. And some are loaves and some so nearly balls We have to use a spell to make them balance: 'Stay where you are until our backs are turned!' We wear our fingers rough with handling them. Oh, just another kind of out-door game, One on a side. It comes to little more: There where it is we do not need the wall: He is all pine and I am apple orchard. My apple trees will never get across And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him. He only says, 'Good fences make good neighbors'. Spring is the mischief in me, and I wonder If I could put a notion in his head: 'Why do they make good neighbors? Isn't it Where there are cows? But here there are no cows. Before I built a wall I'd ask to know What I was walling in or walling out, And to whom I was like to give offence. Something there is that doesn't love a wall, That wants it down.' I could say 'Elves' to him, But it's not elves exactly, and I'd rather He said it for himself. I see him there Bringing a stone grasped firmly by the top In each hand, like an old-stone savage armed. He moves in darkness as it seems to me~ Not of woods only and the shade of trees. He will not go behind his father's saying, And he likes having thought of it so well He says again, "Good fences make good neighbors."
"Tear down the Wall" -Pink Floyd
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 |  Electra Registered Member

Date Joined Feb 2002 Total Posts : 611 | Posted 2/6/2003 5:26 AM (GMT -6) |   | While you are away my heart come undone slowly unravels in a ball of yarn the devil collects it with a grin— our love in a ball of yarn— he’ll never return it he’ll never return it he’ll never return it so when you come back we’ll have to make new love.
Bjørk’s theodicy.
Heal the sick, raise the dead, cleanse the lepers, cast out demons. Matt. 10:8
Edited by - Electra on 02/06/2003 10:27:42 AM | | Back to Top | | |
 |  Tom Registered Member

Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 10353 | Posted 2/6/2003 6:00 AM (GMT -6) |   | I love it! Keep ‘em coming! Beautiful stuff. I liked Doc's Spider poem. But what's a "heal-all"?
How ‘bout we risk exposure and share our own stuff as well. Here, I’ll venture out first!
Vision by TGB
Without a vision I perish; Wasting, wandering away Aching, foundering display Of all I claim to cherish.
What of re-vision? And second sight? What of hope and hope’s historic might? Lifting my view, gazing for more (Sifting review that razes the floor)— Two directions but one plight.
For a new mission I do implore, And beg that God would redesign the floor; Inventing a plan, enchanting my heart, Repenting man, revealing new start; For this I wish and nothing more.
Time for decision— But I’m not sure; Launching, stepping off the ledge, Or watching. Trembling fear’s a wedge Twixt the ledge and me secure.
And so derision I expect; Loud, haunting remarks Proud, daunting remarks; I know them now and so reflect.
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 |  Electra Registered Member

Date Joined Feb 2002 Total Posts : 611 | Posted 2/6/2003 6:22 AM (GMT -6) |   | quote: I love it! Keep ‘em coming! Beautiful stuff. I liked Doc's Spider poem. But what's a "heal-all"?
It’s a kind of flower.
Thanks for your poem, Tom! Have you written music for it as well?
Electra
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 |  BJS Registered Member
 Date Joined Dec 2001 Total Posts : 587 | Posted 2/6/2003 6:24 AM (GMT -6) |   | A Way To Love God Robert Penn Warren
Here is the shadow of truth, for only the shadow is true. And the line where the incoming swell from the sunset Pacific First leans and staggers to break will tell all you need to know About submarine geography, and your father's death rattle Provides all biographical data required for the Who's Who of the dead.
I cannot recall what I started to tell you, but at least I can say how night-long I have lain under the stars and Heard mountains moan in their sleep. By daylight, They remember nothing, and go about their lawful occasions Of not going anywhere except in slow disintegration. At night They remember, however, that there is something they cannot remember. So moan. Theirs is the perfected pain of conscience that Of forgetting the crime, and I hope you have not suffered it. I have.
I do not recall what had burdened my tongue, but urge you To think on the slug's white belly, how sick-slick and soft, On the hairiness of stars, silver, silver, while the silence Blows like wind by, and on the sea's virgin bosom unveiled To give suck to the wavering serpent of the moon; and, In the distance, in plaza, piazza, place, platz, and square, Boot heels, like history being born, on cobbles bang.
Everything seems an echo of something else.
And when, by the hair, the headsman held up the head Of Mary of Scots, the lips kept on moving, But without sound. The lips, They were trying to say something very important.
But I had forgotten to mention an upland Of wind-tortured stone white in darkness, and tall, but when No wind, mist gathers, and once on the Sarré at midnight, I watched the sheep huddling. Their eyes Stared into nothingness. In that mist-diffused light their eyes Were stupid and round like the eyes of fat fish in muddy water, Or of a scholar who has lost faith in his calling.
Their jaws did not move. Shreds Of dry grass, gray in the gray mist-light, hung From the side of a jaw, unmoving.
You would think that nothing would ever again happen.
That may be a way to love God.
Brett
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 |  Springs Registered Member
 Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 636 | Posted 2/6/2003 9:21 AM (GMT -6) |   | Nice thread Tom. This is awesome. Thanks for posting one of your own. I like it. It's very expressive.
Here's my contribution, from Charles Wright and the Watts 103 Street Rythm Band
EXPRESS YOURSELF
Express yourself (boop, bomp, da, da, da, da, dada, da,da da, da) Express yourself You don't never need help from nobody else all you've got to do now 'xpress yourself whatever you do Uh Do it good Uh
What ever you dooo do do Lord, Lawd Do it good aw right It's not what you look like when you're doin' what you're doin' It's what you're doin' when you doin' what cha look like you're doin'
Express yourself Express yourself Some people have everything but other people don't but everything don't mean a thing if it ain't the thing you want
'xpress yourself 'xpress youself aw do it aww do it do it to it go on and do it y'all do it yeeaaah 'spresh yase'f 'spresh yase'f uh woah Lawd aww lawd do it uh
"When all was over, and the last key turned, I sought my pillow, thankful that God had appointed a season of rest for the weary." Harriet Jacobs
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 |  BJS Registered Member
 Date Joined Dec 2001 Total Posts : 587 | Posted 2/6/2003 9:59 AM (GMT -6) |   | Learn To Be Still Don Henley It's just another day in paradise As you stumble to your bed You'd give anything to silence Those voices ringing in your head You thought you could find happiness Just over that green hill You thought you would be satisfied But you never will- Learn to be still
We are like sheep without a shepherd We don't know how to be alone So we wander 'round this desert And wind up following the wrong gods home But the flock cries out for another And they keep answering that bell And one more starry-eyed messiah Meets a violent farewell- Learn to be still Learn to be still
Now the flowers in your garden They don't smell so sweet Maybe you've forgotten The heaven lying at your feet
-Solo-
There are so many contradictions In all these messages we send (We keep asking) How do I get out of here Where do I fit in? Though the world is torn and shaken Even if your heart is breakin' It's waiting for you to awaken And someday you will- Learn to be still Learn to be still
You just keep on runnin' Keep on runnin'
Brett
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 |  Tom Registered Member

Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 10353 | Posted 2/6/2003 7:52 PM (GMT -6) |   | There once was a lady from Ryde Who ate some green apples and died; The apples, fermented inside the lamented, Made cider inside her inside.

Tom
Love never ends
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 |  Springs Registered Member
 Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 636 | Posted 2/7/2003 4:45 AM (GMT -6) |   | Nothing Gold Can Stay - Robert Frost (1874-1963)
Nature's first green is gold, Her hardest hue to hold. Her early leaf's a flower, But only so an hour. Then leaf subsides to leaf. So Eden sank to grief, So dawn goes down to day. Nothing gold can stay.
What is it of Eve in you? It is in us all! -SS | | Back to Top | | |
 |  BJS Registered Member
 Date Joined Dec 2001 Total Posts : 587 | Posted 2/7/2003 5:13 AM (GMT -6) |   | Apparently, lots of Robert Frost fans in here! Good stuff.
Brett
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 |  Tom Registered Member

Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 10353 | Posted 2/7/2003 5:32 AM (GMT -6) |   | Electra: Thanks for your poem, Tom! Have you written music for it as well?
Tom: Naw, no music. Just words. Can't do the music.
Tom
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 |  Springs Registered Member
 Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 636 | Posted 2/13/2003 4:35 PM (GMT -6) |   | This is a great thread. Leave it to Doc to find a poem that combines beauty, death and the problem of evil all in one.
I shared this thread with my sister when she was visiting. Then we had to dig out all my poetry books. I read the Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner by Cooleridge to her, and she read me parts of Romeo and Juliet. (She’s an incurable romantic) That’s where I got my new signature line.
Here’s an excerpt you might enjoy. Romeo son of Montague and Juliet daughter to Capulet were from houses at variance with each other.
Abraham ( servant to Montague) Sampson (servant to Capulet) Gregory (servant to Capulet)
Abr. Do you bite your thumb at us, sir? Sam. I do bite my thumb, sir. Abr. Do you bite your thumb at us, sir? Sam. [Aside to Gregory] Is the law of our side, if I say ay? Gre. No. Sam. No, sir, I do not bite my thumb at you, sir, but I bite my thumb, sir. Gre. Do you quarrel, sir? Sam. If you do, sir, I am for you; I serve as a good man to you. Abr. No better. Sam. Well, sir. Gre. Say “better”: here comes one of my master’s kinsmen. Sam. Yes, better, sir. Abr. You lie. Sam. Draw, if you be men. Gregory, remember thy swashing blow. [They fight]
Enter Benvolio (nephew to Montague, a friend to Romeo) Ben. Part, fools! Put up your swords; you know not what you do.
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 |  Matthew Timothy Short Huh?

Date Joined Apr 2002 Total Posts : 635 | Posted 2/14/2003 2:26 AM (GMT -6) |   | When voices, harps, angels, and glory are the only sound
Keep your faith what you choose, In the richest part of your dreams And you shall never lose, Though what it ever seems
Keep these bonds, through ever what comes, And keep sacred, whatever you have found, When listening to those beating drums, On whatever song spins you round
Dance softly, to your voices love, Together forever, a special song For the dying of a gentle lamb, Lifts many up, to be strong
And this shall keep, whatever you have found, Till the day of dancing, upon His sacred ground
-A poem, I wrote for my sisters wedding
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 |  S.B.G. Registered Member
 Date Joined Jan 2003 Total Posts : 143 | Posted 2/14/2003 3:49 PM (GMT -6) |   | WORSHIP Oh Jesus, to imagine your glory to picture your eyes, your sound, your scent Can it be that you really see me here see my hands reaching up to touch you? Can it be that you really know my heart my weakness and failings and love me still?
One day I will feel the very breath that once breathed life into me! One day I will hear the precious voice that so early called my name
Will you hold me and kiss the top of my head? Will you cup my face in both hands?
Even now, right here where I search for you At this moment Lord, what will you do? Can you see me? Please see me standing here! Take my offering, I dance unashamed! Take me, empty me, make me your own My worship, my life; it's only for you
I enter your presence with abandon Your Spirit intoxicates my soul I am empowered by peace and motion I am yeilding to your instruction Communing with the One who loves me Unfolding the mysteries of God.
---A poem I wrote celebrating my Lord
S.B.G.
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 |  Tom Registered Member

Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 10353 | Posted 2/14/2003 5:23 PM (GMT -6) |   | Thank you Tim and SBG! I enjoyed those!
Tom
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 |  Matthew Timothy Short Huh?

Date Joined Apr 2002 Total Posts : 635 | Posted 2/15/2003 1:42 AM (GMT -6) |   | Risk exposure TGB, and share more of your own stuff and keep celebrating my Lord S.B.G.
I would enjoy it…
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 |  fyodor Registered Member
 Date Joined Dec 2002 Total Posts : 179 | Posted 2/18/2003 8:08 PM (GMT -6) |   | Ladybird By Brad Baron
In your garden I’ll creep through Your pardon, soft girl and ask your name
By the Mississippi’s Slow winter drawl I will brush against Your puffing Red vest, not taking Your hand In my poems I will record your Name, age, Shoe-size and height
What hands should do So might backs, Pacing apart from one Another in sure steps This wood, your land Tree burial, no roots to branch
www.bradbaron.com
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 |  Tom Registered Member

Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 10353 | Posted 2/23/2003 1:18 AM (GMT -6) |   | A True Friend A friend will tell you to your face When you’ve gotten out of place, Without fear he will confront When others think it far too blunt, Address the sin which quietly lies Beneath the notice of your eyes, Will not refuse to bare the load When in your anger you explode, So whether few or many be your crimes A true friend loveth at all times.
TGB 
Love never ends
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 |  Tom Registered Member

Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 10353 | Posted 2/23/2003 1:27 AM (GMT -6) |   | Trophy of Grace Will there ever come a day When what I do and what I say Will be one? Then I will be A trophy of your love to me; Into my Father’s very eyes Look, and find there no surprise, But only him I’ve known so long, The subject of my every song; And with repose to sweet to tell, Plucked from the gaping maw of Hell; But why if all of this be true, Cannot I be true to you? I have naught to plead my case Save the merits of your grace, Save your blood’s atoning force Which from a more worthy source Than all my hands could ‘ere achieve Or from judgment gain reprieve, Has placed me in a gracious way— Oh how I love your gracious way.
TGB 
Love never ends
Edited by - TGB on 02/23/2003 10:25:10 AM | | Back to Top | | |
 |  Matthew Timothy Short Huh?

Date Joined Apr 2002 Total Posts : 635 | Posted 2/23/2003 6:20 AM (GMT -6) |   | Very beautiful TGB, I admire the talent God is given you, Amen.
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 |  S.B.G. Registered Member
 Date Joined Jan 2003 Total Posts : 143 | Posted 2/24/2003 6:39 AM (GMT -6) |   | TGB, What lovely, yet candid, heartfelt words. You are gifted, what beautiful offerings!
S.B.G.
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 |  Springs Registered Member
 Date Joined Jul 2001 Total Posts : 636 | Posted 2/24/2003 6:29 PM (GMT -6) |   | Nice.
Here's a Haiku I wrote years ago,
The forest deep green holds a silence, cushioned by a carpet of moss.
And a couple from today,
Christ’s dare, bright glare Find your heart and free your mind I will meet you there
In that trying time When peace jitters of out rhyme Love becomes sublime
Springs
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